Sunday, July 17, 2011

What do u think of my plot?

It sounded good from the beginning. After a while, I got bored with it. Not necessarily the plot itself but the pitch was entirely too long. I mean, c'mon. Something that lengthy would never be in a book jacket. It sounds like there is too much going on. So many sub-plots and names in the plot. Everything leading up to the part with the ruled and the prophecy in my opinion is enough. Sounds solid. Work with that. Cut out all that stuff. You want an interesting story but you don't want it to be too busy

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